Assignment 17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
Assignment 17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
The Pitch
Reflection and What I Changed
After completing the assignment for elevator pitch no. 1, I reviewed my comments to see where I could improve and where I could continue to succeed for future elevator pitches. Overall, people thought my first elevator pitch was a great summary of my product. I hit all of the points in the opportunity and they thought I was very well spoken. I had an overall calm demeanor and was very successful in completing my task in the elevator pitch. Overall, they thought my elevator pitch was done very well. Unfortunately, I did not receive any constructive criticism, so going forward I had to take it into my own hands to improve upon my last elevator pitch. I kept my overall calm demeanor and confidence while presenting. I wanted to improve upon my last pitch, so I tried to speak more clearly and confidently. I also added a third part to my pitch questioning why UF would not want to take on this idea. Overall, I think this pitch went better the first and with more practice there is always room to improve.
Hey Jamie, I think you did a good job on your second pitch. You were able to reach all your points. Somewhere I fail at is staying on point. I did not write an outline for my pitch and just hoped for the best. I know it's hard but you are not going to have your paper when you are actually going to be asked! We should both make outlines to be more compelling! Other than that no complaints! Good work :)
ReplyDeleteHey Jamie! Good move on adding the third part questioning the school of why they wouldn’t take on this idea. This gives them an opportunity to reflect and ask themselves, “hmmm why?” and reflect on the cost vs. the benefits. Overall great job again keep a calm demeanor and coming off very confident in your presentation! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey Jamie, I enjoyed your second pitch very much as you introduced new aspects of your product that I had not heard from you before. You presented yourself very well, spoke in a professional manner, and you were also able to speak about all your main points in a timely fashion. I am not sure if you planned what you were going to say or if you winged it, but I feel that if you plan an elevator pitch the end product will be a lot better. Great Video!
ReplyDeleteGood job on this elevator pitch Jamie. Just like last time, I thought you did a good job explaining what the problem is that students face and how you plan on combatting this problem. Your elevator pitch follows a good format of identifying the problem, telling how you will solve it, and going into detail about the specifics of the business.
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